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Hi we are 5th grade girls named Hollie and Libby,

What we really **liked**: 1. One of the things we liked was that it was recent information not something that happened a couple years ago; we enjoyed it because this was the first time we had heard about the information, and not something we hear about everyday. 2.The vocabulary was just right for us and good for any other grades that will be reading this (maybe 4th grade and older). 3.The pictures were very helpful, also when you read, it's just the perfect amount of writing.

Some **improvements**: 1.While we were reading we noticed some typing errors, it would be good if you checked that, because sometimes the writing didn't make a lot of sense. 2.We feel that if you go back and expand on the small packs of information, especially in the Uploading section, because we had trouble understanding that one.

We **learned**: The Nokia 888 was very interesting, we learned more about the new types of technology that is in the world today. We really appreciate the effort that you put in.

Thank-you, Hollie and Libby