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  1. page Choice edited ... 1 thing we learned was: -We learned that there is a solution for heavy books so people can st…
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    1 thing we learned was:
    -We learned that there is a solution for heavy books so people can study easier.
    Video 4
    3 things we liked:
    -We liked the pictures from before and after that shows the phones now.
    - We also liked that you included a range of photos.
    -We also liked that some photos were clear.

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    9:11 pm
  2. page Collaboration edited Hi. ... and 4th graders. graders studying in ISB. Are names are Isabel, Helen and Kayo. we e…
    Hi.
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    and 4th graders.graders studying in ISB. Are names are Isabel, Helen and Kayo.
    we enjoyed your video. we hope our responses to your video will help you.
    Video 1
    3 things we liked:
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    very good pictures. without having any pictures the video would be very dull if they had only text. and you
    2 things we think you need to improve on:
    Please lower the sound track so we can hear what you are talking about and we would like you to talk slower.
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    Technology helps us collaborate with each other so we can learn something new.
    Hi.
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    and 4th graders.graders studying in ISB. Are names are Isabel, Helen and Kayo.
    we enjoyed your video! we hope our responses to your video will help you.
    Video 2
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    We liked that the video lots of effects. We liked the music and it was very creative.
    2 things you can improve on:
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    slow down inthe text at the beginning,
    1 thing we learned:
    We learned that collaboration means working together.
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    9:09 pm
  3. page Speed edited Hi, our names are Yuri, Sarah, and Mana from International School Bangkok in Thailand. Mana is …

    Hi, our names are Yuri, Sarah, and Mana from International School Bangkok in Thailand.
    Mana is in 4th grade, Yuri is in 5th grade with Sarah. WE ARE ALL IN ELEMENTARY!

    Video 7.A.1:
    3 things we liked:
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    2 suggestions we have:
    You spoke very clearly and loudly but there were some parts where you spoke too loud and we didn't know what you were saying.
    #You talk too fast. So we don't know what you are trying to say.
    1 thing we learned:
    We learned that people all around the world use computers and other technology like us.
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    1 thing we learned:
    We learned that buying lab tops saves the world.(?)
    P.S:not every phone is an iTouch you know.
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    9:08 pm
  4. page Innovation edited Hi our names are Matt, Abhi, and Sarah. Abhi and I are in 5th grade and Sarah is in 4th grade. We…

    Hi our names are Matt, Abhi, and Sarah. Abhi and I are in 5th grade and Sarah is in 4th grade. We will look forward to watching your Videos.
    Video 1
    3 Things we liked:
    We liked the fact that they repeated words and sentences to get the message clear to the listeners.
    We liked the titles for each section because it told us what you were going to talk about.
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    and ending music.music because it had a good rhythm.
    2 suggestions we have for improvement:
    Speak louder.louder because we could not hear you.
    Speak more clearly.clearly because even if we could hear you we would not understand you.
    1 Thing we learned:
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    mobiles in classes.classes because teachers will think we are playing with them.
    Video 2
    3 Things we liked:
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    about mobile phones.phones because it shows how mobile phone have evolved in the past 25 years.
    We like
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    from different years.years so we could see how they changed.
    We liked
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    he showed it.it because it was in order to see the differences.
    2 Suggestions we have for improvement
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    louder and clearer.clearer because we did not understand you that well.
    Have a
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    history about phones so we know things to do with mobile phones.
    1 Thing we learned
    We learned that in another 25 years phones could be very futuristic.
    Video 4
    3 Things we liked
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    at the end.end because it made us think.
    We liked the fact that you did not have loads of text, you had a bit but explained a lot.
    We liked the fact that you said ipod, notebook computers, laptops, and textbooks etc. are all thing we can use for learning
    2 Suggestions we have for improvement
    Talk more so we can learn more.
    Have a
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    more information so we can understand it better
    1 Things we learned
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    technology can also .also.
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    9:05 pm
  5. page Fun edited Video Hi Todd, Alex and Sophie! We are grade 5 and 4 students named Kayla, Malina, and Sophie. Th…
    VideoHi Todd, Alex and Sophie! We are grade 5 and 4 students named Kayla, Malina, and Sophie. This is our feedback on your videos:
    Video
    1 (Todd's Video)
    The three things that we liked were:
    Music,because it was entertaining to listen to.
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    One thing that we learned was:
    That some I-pods have internet.
    Video 2 (Alex's Video)
    3 things we liked:
    music,Music, because it was entertaining
    credits,

    Credits,
    no other
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    had credits
    more

    More
    than one
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    in class.
    stopped

    Stopped
    music when
    2 of our suggestions:
    makeMake it more
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    we didn't underestandunderstand your main idea
    Speak louder when the music is not playing.

    1 thing we learned was:
    a lotAlot of people
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    for studying
    video

    Video
    3 (Sophie's Video)
    3 things we liked;
    loadLoad and clear voice,
    good

    Good
    ideas,
    convincing

    Convincing

    2 suggestions:
    talkTalk a bit softer,
    talk

    Talk
    a bit happier- it sounded like you were cryingsounded a bit sad. One thing we learned was:
    We can change how we learn with technology.

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    9:03 pm
  6. page Transparency edited Video 1 Great Hi we are Sarah, Nicole, And Natalie and we are here to help improve your videos…

    Video 1
    GreatHi we are Sarah, Nicole, And Natalie and we are here to help improve your videos.Great Job! We
    3 Things We Liked
    BackgroundWe liked the Background Music
    Pictures
    Topic
    because it was really catchy
    We liked The Pictures because they were interesting and helped explain your topic
    We liked your topic because not a lot of other people would write about it

    2 Suggestions For Improvement
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    Clearer Voice because we could not understand some parts and we could not here everything
    Make Background Music Quieter because the background music overlapped your voice and it made it herder to here and understand
    1 Thing We Learned
    Phones Have Many Applications
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    Great Job! We really enjoyed your video! We hope our improvement suggestions help you to edit your video.
    3 Things We Liked
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    Clear Voice because we could understand more parts then other videos
    Text Across The Screen because it made the video interesting and easier to understand your topic
    Sound Effects and Pictures because it made the video more fun to watch
    2 Suggestions For Improvement
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    Little Slower because you were talking a little too fast and we could not understand everything
    Change Text
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    Darker Colors because we could not see all the text because it blended in with the background pictures
    1 Thing We Learned
    In a Class Of 30
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    Great Job! We really enjoyed your video! We hope our improvement suggestions help you to edit your video.
    3 Things We Liked
    Keep The Text On The Screen For Enough Time For Us To Read ItHow you kept the text because then we could read the whole thing and be able to look at the picture
    The Pictures because they were interesting and if we could not understand you then we could look at the pictures
    The Background Music because it was fun and cool
    2 Suggestions For Improvement
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    More Information because we could not get all your ideas together
    Make The Video Longer because it was a little too short
    1 Thing We Learned
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    Can Call Andor Text Your
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    9:03 pm
  7. page Choice edited Hi this is Pedro, Matt, Alex, and Hollie. We are in grades 4 and 5 at the International School B…

    Hi this is Pedro, Matt, Alex, and Hollie. We are in grades 4 and 5 at the International School Bangkok, Thailand. We are giving feedback on your projects to help you improve.
    Video 1
    3 things we liked:
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    3 things we liked:
    -We liked that you included reasons to why we should have phones not books.
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    humor and seriousnessserious at the same time to explaintime.
    -We liked that you explained
    what you
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    talking about.
    2 Suggestions for improvement:
    -We thought you guys needed to speak louder and more clear.
    -We also thought you needed to include more participating students so that the video can be more interesting.
    1 thing we learned was:
    -We learned that there is a solution for heavy books so people can study easier.

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    9:02 pm
  8. page Integrity edited ... • Speak a little louder because it was hard to hear most of what you said 1 thing we learned …
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    • Speak a little louder because it was hard to hear most of what you said
    1 thing we learned
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    people use and other percentages
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    9:00 pm

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