Video 1
Hi we are Sarah, Nicole, And Natalie and we are here to help improve your videos.Great Job! We really enjoyed your video! We hope our improvement suggestions help you to edit your video.

3 Things We Liked
  • We liked the Background Music because it was really catchy
  • We liked The Pictures because they were interesting and helped explain your topic
  • We liked your topic because not a lot of other people would write about it
2 Suggestions For Improvement
  • Louder and Clearer Voice because we could not understand some parts and we could not here everything
  • Make Background Music Quieter because the background music overlapped your voice and it made it herder to here and understand

1 Thing We Learned
  • Phones Have Many Applications

Video 2
Great Job! We really enjoyed your video! We hope our improvement suggestions help you to edit your video.

3 Things We Liked
  • Nice Clear Voice because we could understand more parts then other videos
  • Text Across The Screen because it made the video interesting and easier to understand your topic
  • Sound Effects and Pictures because it made the video more fun to watch

2 Suggestions For Improvement
  • Speak A Little Slower because you were talking a little too fast and we could not understand everything
  • Change Text Colors To Darker Colors because we could not see all the text because it blended in with the background pictures


1 Thing We Learned
  • In a Class Of 30
27 of them have phones
3 of them have I-phones
19 had Internet access on the phone


Video 3
Great Job! We really enjoyed your video! We hope our improvement suggestions help you to edit your video.

3 Things We Liked
  • How you kept the text because then we could read the whole thing and be able to look at the picture
  • The Pictures because they were interesting and if we could not understand you then we could look at the pictures
  • The Background Music because it was fun and cool

2 Suggestions For Improvement
  • Add More Information because we could not get all your ideas together
  • Make The Video Longer because it was a little too short

1 Thing We Learned
  • That We Can Call or Text Your Teacher