Good things

  • It is good that you tell about who created the web and who made it more advanced.
  • For people who are in older grades such as middle school or high school the words are magnificent.
  • We also like how you attach many links.

Improvements

  • We thought that your words are good, but we think you should make the words SIMPLER.
  • You also might want to make it a bit easier for everyone to understand by inserting more pictures, videos, and space the words out because we think the words are too advanced.
  • We think the content is good but you should make it more interesting by including more scientific/technical facts.

What we learned

  • We learned that very good education would not be possible without the internet because the internet gives us lots of information.